Sitting some more,
I felt discontent,
brewing.
Oh! no, not again,
judging mind wanted to dismiss,
quick.
Down below,
tender heart was beating
tender heart was beating
to another drum.
Soon, I started to see,
the fire of sacred desire,
kept under lid.
I've been meaning to say I've been enjoying your recent forays into poetry. I find it can be easier to communicate a complex thought/experience in metaphorical lyrics, than in rational discourse (though each has its own place, of course). :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Ian. Yes, I am with you on poetry. Poetry also gets closer to the heart, I find . . .
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